I notice three other things:
"recieve" is spelled wrong in the image text at the top, although spelled correctly below it.
Two different sentences at the top and bottom say you'll receive a "key", while the title text and the push button say you'll receive the whole software package. Which is it?
The word "login" is used twice in one sentence as both a noun and a verb. Kind of like, "E-mail your e-mail to my e-mail" or "Smurf the smurf that smurfed smurf". "Login now" ought to be "Log in now", and "create your login now" could be improved to "create an account now."
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